You and Me

[333maxwell]

If anyone has the time, I just finished writing and recording this lil pop song. I would appreciate any feedback..

Thanks

You and Me
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5696650&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5696650&q=hi

 

[Tim]

Personally I think you would do the song justice if you increase the tempo just a little bit. Other than that ... not bad.

 

[Justaguyin_nc]

Another one for the headphones... like listening to the parts that way...pulling in from different sides.. mean distortion on those licks... I think ya got a great rough voice.. and pretty darn good lyricist imho... keep them comming man..they are good tunes to listen to... thanks for sharing!

 

[333maxwell]

Personally I think you would do the song justice if you increase the tempo just a little bit. Other than that ... not bad.

Sure sounds like a lot of work though.. I could increase the drums, but for everything else like Bass and Keys vocals and single hits, I would have to
re-record.

ACK...

Thanks for your time and ear!!

 

[333maxwell]

Another one for the headphones... like listening to the parts that way...pulling in from different sides.. mean distortion on those licks... I think ya got a great rough voice.. and pretty darn good lyricist imho... keep them comming man..they are good tunes to listen to... thanks for sharing!

Thanks.. you've always been very suportive!

 

[helliott]

My take:
I like the vocal and tempo. A bit Dylanesque and a fair bit like Lou Reed. Your delivery is nice that way, kinda conversational and rap like. That's a good thing.
Guitar-wise, if it was me, I'd back off on the gain and effects on the lead instruments and focus on the groove you're creating with the rhythm and vocal. It's got a nice sort of loose and cool feel, and I think a less overdriven sort of lead part would be good.

 

[zeusse]

It has a great vibe dude and the composition is good more of a mixing issue than anything else but hey I never took sound engineering 101 either, my recordings have issues too so just tinker and have a glass of wine works for me

 

[SuperSwede]

I like the song, the melody line is very good. I dont like that raw guitar though... turn down the DS and it will be much better sounding. Keep it up!

 

[333maxwell]

My take:
I like the vocal and tempo. A bit Dylanesque and a fair bit like Lou Reed. Your delivery is nice that way, kinda conversational and rap like. That's a good thing.
Guitar-wise, if it was me, I'd back off on the gain and effects on the lead instruments and focus on the groove you're creating with the rhythm and vocal. It's got a nice sort of loose and cool feel, and I think a less overdriven sort of lead part would be good.

Good advice to take heed of!

Thanks man!

 

[333maxwell]

It has a great vibe dude and the composition is good more of a mixing issue than anything else but hey I never took sound engineering 101 either, my recordings have issues too so just tinker and have a glass of wine works for me

My only problem, is I have enough wine to where it starts sounding good.. then the next day I listen and think 'would one more, or one less wine of helped'.. *G*

Thanks for your time!

 

[333maxwell]

I like the song, the melody line is very good. I dont like that raw guitar though... turn down the DS and it will be much better sounding. Keep it up!

Thanks my friend.. I will take your advice to heed pending the re-mix.

Appreciate your time!

 

[SuperSwede]

My only problem, is I have enough wine to where it starts sounding good.. then the next day I listen and think 'would one more, or one less wine of helped'.. *G*

Thanks for your time!

FYI, the correct answer: One More.

 

[333maxwell]

FYI, the correct answer: One More.

I kind of come from that same school! *G*